ZOMG, squee!!! of course, I told you that already.

I love your use of sensory data in this--it really feels like you're there. Um... yeah. The smoke, the pizza, the fire. You made all of those things so *real.*

And OH Dick and Roy. They are... guh. Words fail, only I love them so much, I just want to squick them to bits.

And your decision on the last line was perfect. Just saying.

Now I need a DC icon. ::le sigh::